What NOT to do:
I do this. I want to do this for you. Can you please make that happen?
What to DO:
Hey, I saw you are doing this. This thing could become better if you did a, b and c. Also, once you do these, your business will be affected in this manner.
I could help you do this. Here is the work I have done and here is why I could help:
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Please do not get lost as just another person in the long list of someone else’s cold emails.
Make it impossible for people to say no.